Biên Tập Phong Cách

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## Editing Levels

### Developmental Editing
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Focus: Structure and content
- Is the argument logical?
- Is content complete?
- Is organization effective?
- Does it achieve its purpose?
```

### Line Editing
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Focus: Style and flow
- Is the voice consistent?
- Do sentences flow well?
- Is word choice strong?
- Is tone appropriate?
```

### Copy Editing
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Focus: Correctness
- Grammar and punctuation
- Spelling and typos
- Consistency (style guide)
- Fact-checking basics
```

### Proofreading
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Focus: Final polish
- Typos and errors
- Formatting issues
- Missing elements
- Final quality check
```

## Style Improvements

### Strengthen Verbs
```
Weak: "He walked slowly"
Strong: "He ambled" / "He trudged" / "He shuffled"

Weak: "She looked at him angrily"
Strong: "She glared at him"

Weak: "The company made a decision"
Strong: "The company decided"
```

### Cut Redundancy
```
Redundant → Clean

"absolutely essential" → "essential"
"advance planning" → "planning"
"brief summary" → "summary"
"close proximity" → "proximity"
"consensus of opinion" → "consensus"
"end result" → "result"
"free gift" → "gift"
"future plans" → "plans"
"past history" → "history"
"unexpected surprise" → "surprise"
```

### Eliminate Weasel Words
```
Remove or replace:
- "somewhat"
- "fairly"
- "relatively"
- "kind of"
- "sort of"
- "a little bit"

Be specific instead:
"relatively expensive" → "$500 more than competitors"
```

## Sentence Variety

### Vary Sentence Length
```
Mix short, medium, and long sentences.

Short sentences create impact. They punch.

Medium sentences provide detail and context,
giving readers time to process information.

Longer sentences can weave together multiple ideas,
creating a sense of flow and complexity that
mirrors more sophisticated thinking, though they
should be used sparingly.
```

### Vary Sentence Openings
```
Don't start every sentence with:
- "The" / "I" / "It"

Mix openings:
- Start with action: "Running late, she..."
- Start with setting: "In the morning light..."
- Start with transition: "However, the data..."
- Start with subordinate clause: "When the results came in..."
```

## Rhythm and Flow

### Create Rhythm
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Pattern: Short, short, long.

"The door opened. A shadow fell. Sarah knew
before she turned that everything was about
to change."
```

### Smooth Transitions
```
Addition: moreover, furthermore, additionally
Contrast: however, nevertheless, on the other hand
Cause: therefore, consequently, as a result
Time: meanwhile, subsequently, eventually
Example: for instance, specifically, to illustrate
```

## Tone Adjustments

### Formal to Casual
```
Very Formal:
"It is recommended that immediate action be taken."

Professional:
"We recommend taking action immediately."

Conversational:
"Let's act on this now."

Casual:
"Time to move on this."
```

### Adjust Formality
```
To sound more formal:
- Remove contractions
- Use complete sentences
- Choose technical vocabulary
- Avoid personal pronouns

To sound more casual:
- Use contractions
- Allow fragments
- Choose everyday words
- Address reader directly ("you")
```

## Common Fixes

### Fix Nominalizations
```
Nominalization (noun-heavy):
"The implementation of the new policy led to
the improvement of employee satisfaction."

Verbal (verb-strong):
"Implementing the new policy improved
employee satisfaction."
```

### Fix Hedging Overuse
```
Over-hedged:
"It might possibly be the case that this
could potentially work."

Direct:
"This should work."
```

### Fix Passive Voice
```
Passive: "The ball was thrown by John."
Active: "John threw the ball."

Passive: "Mistakes were made."
Active: "We made mistakes."
```

## Style Checklist

### Before Finalizing
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□ Strong opening hook
□ Consistent voice throughout
□ Varied sentence structure
□ No unnecessary words
□ Active voice predominant
□ Specific, concrete language
□ Smooth transitions
□ Powerful closing
```

## The Editing Process

### Step-by-Step
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1. Read through once (no changes)
2. Fix structure and organization
3. Improve sentences and flow
4. Polish word choice
5. Check grammar and mechanics
6. Read aloud for final check
7. Rest, then review fresh
```

### The 10% Rule
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After your first edit, cut 10% more.
Your writing is almost always too long.
```

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